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My Saddest moment

=Title= ="Life by Life."= =It all happend when is was leaving town I got taken from school and it was only 2.00. My nana my nana picked me up at the front gate and said that I was going to live with her from now on an we went back to my place and picked up my clothes and said good by to my mum and then left to go to my nanas and i so badly wanted to run away for ever and ever and never come back and agian but I didn't.At nanas I had to help unload her car and do the dishers and other stuff.Then we had dinner and went to bed.In the morning.I got a phone call saying that they were going to come and pick me up but I was at nanas so they had to come to nanas and talk to me to .Then we went to rugby but it was finshed wich was dumb.We went to a fish and chip shop and had lunch at the park it was yum.We were on our way back to mums house and dad said that I can live at hie house but ther was consequences I had to live by and I said yes .I said good by to my mum and was going to Greytown that day and I felt extreamely emotoinal and wanted to cry and that was the saddest day of my life.= =BY RYAN NESBIT= Crying is allowed when we are upset. Good work Ryan, I would like to see you go back and read it again as though you were someone who didn't know what happened on that day. There are bits that are hard to follow.  = = = = = = =...MRS SNOTBAG HAVING A VERY BAD DAY...= =Mrs Snotbag was going to work on a donkey she was having fun until she came to a hill and had to walk her donkey for about two days when she got to the top she fond a parachute and flew of the mountain she was so high that she was getting scared and then she was going to fast and crashed in to grandma who is in a wheelchair.She called the ambulance and they picked her up one of them fanted and die from pimples grose said Mrs Snotbag.After all that mess she went to the mall to do some shopping first she went to the ladies shopping room first and she fond some nice clothes and payed for them.She went to get something to eat from mMc donalds she got a big mac wich is so nice.Then all of a sudden she fell in love with the man next to her then they started talking about there lives and they were interesting what they were saying then they were going but the man wanted to kiss the agley Mrs sanotbag but istead of kissing the man she kissed a frog then she went crazy and throw the frog at a police manand he put her in jail for the rest of her life and that is the end of that gruppy old MRS SNOTBAG=

=BY RYAN NESBIT= Good work Ryan. Make sure that you edit your work carefully. Some errors are not underlined, so you have to check carefully.  =THE MAN WITH CHOCOLATE FLAVOURED HANDS= = = = = =Once upon a time there was a dirty ugly old man with hands that looked like chocolate flavoured candy. He was walking through a sunflower field, so he picked a sunflower out of the most beautiful patch. At that very moment he was thinking about his wife she was a beautiful lady with white, pale skin and brown hair and in the end he dedicated the yellow and orange sunflower to her. The reason I said he had chocolate flavoured candy fingers is because he used to work in a chocolate factory but when he was working there he broke his back and he had to leave but he still visited and held sometimes but didn’t get payed for it he was an rather good man and care about money. But one day the factory got put in a movie and they didn’t even tell him until he…..= Please complete. Re-read to make sure that all bits make sense.  =The ever so wonderful burning flame,= =exploding from the match of fame,= =white phosperous burned around the match,= =the colours came up within a flash,= =gazing at the tinted neon with,= =hot soothing flames,= =dancing in the lazy night.=

=This flower is yellow and very bright, = =it’s growing every day and night, = =bigger, bigger as it grows, = =this flower is becoming my home, = =comfy warm and very small, = =my home is great for, = =people to come and visit, = =when they come they = =look so yum so I do something = =they scream, they yell they cry, = =<span style="color: rgb(37, 197, 32)"> but nobody can hear them. =